mark's response to cat's paper

ENGL 252 Kizzier

Writer’s Response 1

1. What kind of intro is the author using? Suggest a way to use another effective one.
Cat seems to have the beginning of the contradiction thing. But it is not very strong, if there is one. Cat may consider using an introduction that…illustrates the unreliability of the narrator?





2. Where is the author describing a scene from one of the stories? Suggest at least one other scene from a story the author could use. do you like best about your paper right now? Why?
The first paragraph includes a description. The author may use a scene from the oblong box more toward the end, when the main character begins to seem a little off, just to give the audience an inclination of her ultimate means.




3. List any paragraphs where you were confused or unclear about the author‘s intention or meaning. What made it unclear? How could it be said more coherently?
As of this far, everything flows more smoothly than I could make it. Continue to use your outline. It looks like you know where you’re going (more than I can say).